Great work Andre! This piece of writing gave me many pictures in my head! I really like how you have used alliteration (slimy sea scarf) to add detail to your writing. I also like how you used a piece of onomatpoeia ('POP'), which is a word that sounds like a sound.
Great work Andre! This piece of writing gave me many pictures in my head! I really like how you have used alliteration (slimy sea scarf) to add detail to your writing. I also like how you used a piece of onomatpoeia ('POP'), which is a word that sounds like a sound.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Mr Taylor